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Old 10-02-2007, 09:58 AM
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Go on then, rip my site apart! cant remember how long ago i did it and the portfolio is way out of date but ill soon find time in between the drinking and the sleeping to do a new one!

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Old 10-02-2007, 10:01 AM
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I like it, can't see too much wrong. Not sure if I like the chinese writing, if it is relevant I think it should be a little clearer why.
I love the menu on the left, nice and simple but modern enough.
Don't like the blue of the link, it's default blur and either means the blue should be relevant to another element or you couldn't be bothered to change it from default.
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totally agree about the link, something wrong in my style sheet sumwhere!

chinese writing means nothing! just something i designed and liked the idea of, some ppl like it some ppl dont!

thanks for comments tho laura :)
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Nice clean site and easy to navigate, but don't like the chinese writing. I visited your site the other day and almost clicked away again as I thought it was all in chinese. If you do want to keep it, maybe think about making it a lighter grey so that everything else stands out more than the symbols. At the moment they are the most dominant on the page and first thing to grab peoples attention which is not much use if they mean nothing!

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Revisit Meta tag not needed. I still have some in my sites deleting them when I can.
I also like the menu, but the chinese is too dominent.
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The menu in what we do is pointless. You click web design and it jumps down when people would actually just scroll down. Then you click print design and it jumps to the top.

If you want to be spidered a little better make each of these sections a seperate page and a little more conent for google to read about your major services.
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In the photography portfolio how do shut down a picture??
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top right corner, for some reason on some internet browsers it doesn't show.. i need to find a fix for it
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I have a laundry list - so here goes:
Why is that your name? You name is blue 22 and yet the color blue is no where to be found. Are you speaking of the state of mind - blue - like man I'm sad, I should sing the blues. LOL.

Anyways, more technical stuff now:
I kind of like the chinese writing, because it makes me feel smart, "Hey mom, I know how write 'inspire' in chinese!"
I think something that would be catchy would be just the number 22 - in blue - hence the name "Blue 22."
The navigation, I like it, but I would rather see the CSS version of the same thing instead of javascript. Remember, people can turn JS off - so only use it when you need to.
Also, tables are a thing of the past and make it hard on accessibilty standards - so try to use more divs in place of tables.

I am sure that 99.9% of the information I just provided - you may already know - but read my sig. Keep up the good work.

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