Critique Please

[dannynosleeves]

So the site is an ok start, but its clear that it was written in some sort og WYSIWYG editor. If you want to get into web design seriously, take some time to start learning hand coding, xhtml and css. I think once you add more skills to your arsnel you'll be golden.

[TripleMoonsDesign]

Thanks everyone for your replies! I really appreciate all the feedback.

Very cool about the preloading in CSS, I'll have to research that. Didn't know you could do that!

Here are my revised concepts after taking into consideration everyones comments...I also put in one of the logos I've been muling over.

[Toon]

I prefer the 2nd

[Mack]

I think its VERY clear your primarily a graphic designer. I think you need to combine your navigation into one. I think your going to struggle with usability issues have 2 navigations.

[TripleMoonsDesign]

I was under the impression that this was a design forum and designers are welcome.

I probably should have clarified my critique request, and for that I apologize. I am asking for a critique on the design and usability...Not the programming. I outsource my more complicated programming to my partner (and he does the Flash as well).

I do appreciate the tips provided on the programming however. I will research them and put them to good use.

[Toon]

Designers are welcome, ignore the coders they're always miserable.

[SatanicPenguins]

I prefer the second as well, although i didnt have a problem or see much of one navigating your site in the first place lol.

i see where your idea is with the separate navigations as well, But with a little thinking you could combine the two sections and it be just as simple to navigate, but if you're dead set on separate navigations, more power to ya.


don't see anything wrong with the revised (2nd) though, clean looking.

[dcpweb]

Hi,

You should add form validation to your contact form on your website

regards