Graphic Design Forum and Web Design Forum  

Go Back   Graphic Design Forum and Web Design Forum »Web Design Forum »Web Design Forum Showcase

Notices

Web Design Forum Showcase Showcase your Web Designs here


Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 21-01-2007, 01:11 AM
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Switzerland
Posts: 49
Default Personal Portfolio Redesign - Critiques Wanted

Hi,

I just launched a new design for my website.

Would appreciate any comments whether bad or good.


Note: the content is not complete, and may change, but what Im more concerned with help on is the design, usability of the site. If the navigation is clear enough. Any typos I may have missed would be apppreciated.


http://www.benshu.ch

thanks
__________________
Evolving with style // www.benshu.ch

Last edited by bluesage; 22-01-2007 at 01:13 AM.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote

  #2 (permalink)  
Old 22-01-2007, 10:57 AM
Toon's Avatar
Netvibes is an Addiction™
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Sheffield, UK
Gender: Male
Posts: 19,802
Default

I quite like it it's clear enough, the only thing I don't like is the font that the words home and the other navigation is in, I just don't think it works. Maybe try something a little cleaner to blend in with the rest of the site.

(But thats just personal preference)
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 22-01-2007, 05:22 PM
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Switzerland
Posts: 49
Default

thanks :), I like the look of the font so wont be changing that unless I get some serious complaints from users of my website :)

I still need to make the "banners" better, the images used on some pages arent great, was thinking of going for a vector type illustration with some nice bright colors, but Im not an illustrator.
__________________
Evolving with style // www.benshu.ch
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 22-01-2007, 06:29 PM
Toon's Avatar
Netvibes is an Addiction™
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Sheffield, UK
Gender: Male
Posts: 19,802
Default

I agree vector images are alot nicer and more professional, if you're not much an illustrator you may want to look for someone who'll be willing to do them for you. A friend of mine outsourced to a illustrator he found on the web and the guy had just started up, he didn't charge a great deal he just wanted recognition on the site as a form of advertising. If I can get the contact I'll let you know.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 12-07-2007, 05:10 PM
Carla-Jay's Avatar
Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 67
Default

I like the icon menu
__________________
"Behind every good man there is a good woman and behind that another man looking at her ass"
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 12-07-2007, 07:02 PM
tommylogic's Avatar
f*ck yeah it validates!!!
 
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Virtually Everywhere
Gender: Male
Posts: 6,314
Default

not bad.. I would consider this a good example of the 2.0 design style.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 12-07-2007, 10:25 PM
Zaoris's Avatar
Established Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Romania, Europe
Gender: Male
Posts: 582
Default

Oh I pretty much like the simpleness of your site. While navigating trough the pages, I didn't have any problems with colors of anything, the only page I'd say you should work on..is the main page.
Needs some more colour imo, or just something to detail it a bit..it looks a lil bit empty.
__________________
"Yours trully, disciple of the discpline named Web design"
http://zaoris.deviantart.com
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 13-07-2007, 02:32 PM
dannynosleeves's Avatar
currently on the run
 
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: NC
Gender: Male
Posts: 445
Default

imnage quality is kinda lacking. Nothing on the site seems really sharp.
__________________
Outlaw Design Blog - Better Than Sex
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Design Portfolio/Personal dustyfantildeath Graphic Design & Web Design Critique 4 26-03-2008 04:46 AM
Bali Web Design Redesign need critiques chazzuka Graphic Design & Web Design Critique 3 24-01-2008 07:59 PM
Two Critiques scottfreeman Web Design Forum Showcase 7 17-12-2007 02:36 PM
Critiques appreciated jkinz Web Design Forum Showcase 4 10-08-2007 04:18 PM
Personal Portfolio. hideout Web Design Forum Showcase 8 12-04-2007 08:13 PM


All times are GMT. The time now is 08:17 PM.



Estetica Design Forum's Privacy Policy
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.2.0