Tahosting.co.uk

[TommyArnold]

Not sure if im posting in the right bit but can anyone give me some feedback please

be brutal


www.tahosting.co.uk

its not finished yet need the feedback first

[Toon]

::Moved to web design showcase::

[Laura Lynne]

One thing I noticed is the number fonts don't seem to match, only a small thing but it does stand out..

[zumojuice]

Hi tommy,
generally its clean, it gives the deals clearly.

Just a few points from my point of view:

1- The banner is nice but the navigation is off to one side.Its not a major issue but it looks at bit funny and therefore clients may think the same.

2- Differentate between plans more clearly. The background could be the stronger blue and the 3 packages on lighter backgrounds. Maybe use colour to show its three deals.

3 - Check details - the fonts don't match on the deals prices and also there is a spelling error with transfair. should that be transfer?

4 - you may find that balancing the package details with a another font make make them cleaner - a nice humanist font could work. Consider putting 'Order' at the bottom.

5- Consider adding the TA-250 trail offer as a point in its details list.
Otherwise good effort so far.

[Kelly Creative]

I noticed at the bottom...

MSN> Support@tahosting.co.uk <MSN

Does this mean people can only contact you through MSN, this might not be a good idea.

[zumojuice]

Just done this very quick mock up of how maybe added another font (in this case I've used eurostile to suppliment the font your using now and 'Fontin' for the other text - its free and under 'free font' in the typography section). This might just clean up the details and make them easier to understand.

[Toon]

Or code it better for SEO...

Here

[zumojuice]

thats a good point actually - Not only will Google, Yahoo and all the other that spider through here and onto your site pick up those words - but also it allows users with reading software to have a better go.

[TommyArnold]

wow I am amazed by the response. thank you for all your help people to be honest tahosting started out as a text based free host but due to popular demand i needed to give people a way of ordering so i rushed it a little bit


anyway i have made a few changes inspired by zumojuice's example tell me what you think

as for seo its going to cost a lot of money to get my host to the top of google using "web hosting" for example , but I am already 1 position when you search "tahosting" . Good enough for now

[zumojuice]

The image quality is not great on those and the blues do need some work (the first one is maybe too close to the background. but the layout of the boxes works a lot better.
I either drop the blue of the background (or fade it a lot) or make the description boxes white.

In terms of the SEO thing, if they were text, you might get random hits if people searched 'web hosting + 99 MYSQL' or something. Try thinking about the box as well, sometimes the strangest things can get you up in listings.

also are you offering domain names too?