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im still working on the kerning and the lowercases so thats a given.
but im leaning towards the 2nd one... or maybe not.. see my dilemma. need feedback thanks
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your curved edges on both look a little jagged... might be the compression on the image you have. You got a full scale link somewhere?
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dont worry its not jagged, its just the compression and the text is just really thin/small

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yeah... not bad. Can't see where I'd use it personally. but not bad at all.
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Quite nice. Not sure I'd use it personally, but I can see it working as a music poster font.

I prefer the second. Definitely, the second.

Hope this helps.

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yea, its very subjective, something like font for a rock/metal cd cover or a comic book front page title

thanks for the comment guys
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the space on the second one makes it more readable.
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yea functionwise, and it seems more balanced too

its the same space though, just an illusion when i shrink it
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Not sure if the arms and the crossbars shouldn't be at the same level.
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really? ok...

Arkady has a point there - but I guess once you've got it made - you can create refine after refine -
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