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    Critique required on homepage


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    Hi everyone,

    Could you give me some feedback on the homepage I've created before I role out the other pages.
    They are bespoke kitchen designers and the website should appear passionate, intuitive, tenacious, creative, environmentally aware.

    any hinters would be great? should there be more stuff on the homepage like links to other pages? Although client has said it is just a portfolio site??

    thanks

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    Macsima, do you have a live link / attachment we can look at to help you?

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    woops - totally forgot to put image up!

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    Really nice layout and design although it should say kitchen

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    Quote Originally Posted by Joesnow View Post
    Really nice layout and design although it should say kitchen
    good point! - thanks!

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    One small thing, I feel there should be some more padding about the 'Our Work' line, it looks a little too close to the box above. Nice design though
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    great thanks - I'll move text down a bit.

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    The pink/purple bar looks out of place to me, the colours don't really go with anything else on the site?

    Think it maybe needs more padding underneath the telephone number aswel?
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