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    little illustration


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    Last edited by MRH; 30-08-2012 at 08:55 AM.

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    I like it all apart from the black flowers around the outside, they don't really fit the rest

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    There's a lot of dissonance in the composition. Because the leg in front is so open and wide, it's the only place I want to look. Then because the leg points down...I'm pretty much done.

    If you can add a little more detail into the front leg I think it will help your piece out more because it's too much a center point.

    And I agree about the flowers. Not because they don't look like the others but because they spread where a viewer is looking. It's as though the art is in quadrants.

    Great art uses a rule of thirds.
    Christina Wilkinson
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    i see what you mean about the front leg, i really didnt notice thanks for that!!!

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    What is the concept?

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