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Thread: Critique please
13-02-2012, 11:30 AM #9
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I think you should drop the table layoutsIf I put my website here my boss would fire my ass!
15-02-2012, 07:07 AM #10
How old are you again?
Vertaxe is right try copying it, for fast learning.
good luck ;)
15-02-2012, 10:06 AM #11
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extremely poor site mate, start with making a real logo at least once before you offer branding.
You can not be real asking our opinion about this site, did you look at it yourself?
Nothing right about it exept your bravery.
15-02-2012, 04:07 PM #12
Definitely brave, I think.
As the others have previously mentioned, drop the tables. useelements to structure your HTML layouts.
Your logos themselves are definitely in need of an improvement if you're wanting to sell your services as a trade. I would recommend taking a deeper look into the subject of logo design. Logo's are more than just pretty pictures for a business, it's a face, an identity for them.
By the looks of it, I'm going to have to say I assume that you don't have a strategic process in which you can give a potential client a solution that is designed for them. Please take the time to learn more about the trade you're placing yourself in.
Google can be your best friend, here. a place of infinite resources.
To get started on learning the basics, I'll direct you to a good link on Logo design.
How To Design A Logo
Also. this goes for everything you're doing, including the websites. From looking at your code, I get the feeling you didn't code a lot of the CSS.
You can go to the following link to learn a hell of a lot about the basics in web design.
W3Schools Online Web Tutorials
Once you've learned the basics, just go out and try to design lots of different kinds of websites! If you think of a way to do a website, but don't know how, there's a lot of resources out there that will help you.
I hope you don't take this as too harsh, I just think you should take a step back from selling yourself and perhaps learn a little bit more about the industries you've chosen to be in.
20-02-2012, 03:10 PM #13
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As said drop the tables, it will make your site very outdated
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