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11-08-2010, 06:07 PM #1
In need of some critique: Webcomic Homepage
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I am new to these forums so I hope I follow all the guidelines correctly. A friend of mine and I have started a webcomic (manga to be exact) about three months ago on DeviantArt and we believed it was time to build an official website for it.
So, before I link the webpage to ask you nice folks for a critique, here is who was responsible for everything:
- Arseniquez does the Illustrations of the comic and the two figures in the BG of the website
- I designed the entire website, build every icon, logo etc. and do the storyboards for the comic
- Tim Harding (from 2P!Start) did the coding for the website, so that it's an actually functional website online
Here is the link:
I'm looking forward to the response(s).
21-08-2010, 02:36 PM #2
Everything just seems a little too largeA life? Cool where do I download one of those??
23-08-2010, 07:10 PM #3
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I agree, it is very wide; not everyone is fortunate to have widescreen or 19" plus yet.
Also the logo/nav is huge, but the bit underneath "Manga Format" and "right to left" is almost unreadable - oh and this could be real text instead of an image.
There seems to be a lot of white space in the footer area, and those arrows are huuge!
24-08-2010, 03:12 PM #4
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The background image (the two characters in full color) are extremely distracting and create a lot of noise in general. Try graying the entire image so you can still see the colors but they're a lot less powerful.
Consider taking away the dark box under the title and making the text plain black.
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