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Thread: Please critique my logo
26-09-2009, 10:56 AM #1
Please critique my logo
Last edited by piush; 26-09-2009 at 11:38 PM.
26-09-2009, 11:40 PM #2
Logo critique please
i have this idea in my head
any suggestions are welcome.
Last edited by StiligeCecilie; 27-09-2009 at 02:32 PM. Reason: change the wording - removed "sig" link
28-09-2009, 05:24 AM #3
the chef's hat illustration is a little crude....i think it could use some refinement/stylization.
i think your type treatment works well with your second submission...although i feel that like with the chef's hat, your typographic logo and illustrated logo work fine individually, but not combined.
try using the "apple/heart" idea as the letter "O" in lovers'.
30-09-2009, 11:25 AM #4
I'd go for the hat concept.
Try putting the hat above "F" or "dL" and bend it over a bit to the left.Life is history in the making..and vice-versa.
01-10-2009, 10:35 AM #5
I do like the ideas, but I think they could be more refined. The hat for example, if I saw it somewhere away from the text I wouldn't immediately link it with a chef's hat. Also the hat and the text don't really seem to match. It basicly looks like 2 different things next to eatch other, instead that they're really forming a logo. I think it's because the font is very think and strong, while the hat illustration has thin lines.
02-10-2009, 03:10 AM #6
Yeah, why not go for a cake or something?Life is history in the making..and vice-versa.
08-10-2009, 12:57 PM #7
I would use the fruit as the V in loverīs and would try moving catering to a second line and smaller font The hat has just been used soooo much that is a cliche ;)
14-10-2009, 05:36 PM #8
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