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    Web Design (just thrown together)


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    Hey everybody! New to estetica. Client is a model /production/actor who is in the fashion industry. This is a preliminary for general layout, I would like to know what you think? Thanks!


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    i think it's too small. can't really see what to give any critique on

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    yeah I didnt realize. Here is the larger view

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    From the time I was eleven I've been into designing websites.Now I'm eighteen years old and looking into pursing web design as a career.I'm not stupid,I know that what I know about web design now isn't nearly enough to get a job with.I'm planning on either going to college or taking a course on web design,but before I can make this kind of choice I need to know.
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    I think it's a bit over-done. The main gallery section looks fine, but the framing silhouettes lack relevancy and detract from the images of your client. The blue boxes might work better in a more subdued tone. The numbered boxes should be closer to your main content area to balance out how close your banner is to main. Also, the "J" of Jillian is a bit muddy. The last name is a lot clearer.

    Hope this helps.

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    I like it! But I do agree with the J is a bit hard to read and needs to be cleaned up and moving the numbers closer could not hurt.

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    Thank you for the great suggestions! I will have to post the updates as soon as I get them done.

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    why do u tell us that its just thrown together? if ur implying that this was effortless to you and that ur not proud of it then why even post...

    i cant stand when people say that kind of stuff....weather it took 5 mins or 5 hours , its your work and if u dont like it u dont have to post it ..



    The design is very simple if ur client was happy with it then so be it ....but i see nothing that catchs my eye.



    when ppl look at ur work they do not care how long it took ...its a minute detail, what matters is final project.

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