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    my company business card/logo design critique


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    Hello everyone,

    I have been assigned the task of creating an updated look for our architecture firm. We mostly do multi-family house and historical preservation work. This is what i have for the business card with the new logo compared to what we currently have. I was wondering if i could get some feedback/opinions on the card.... more importantly when i try and take the design and create a universal logo for all of our marketing stuff its falling way short and need serious help because this has been me for some time now
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    I actually quite like what you have done.
    I would suggest getting a logo together first..then manipulate it into a brand
    If you go this way round i think you might struggle a bit..it just seems like a the hard way...

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    That is actually really effective, it definately grabs my attention.
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    I agree with Nick, very effective, my only though was to make the text size a little smaller.

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    Oh I like that. Very well done. The keys are awesome.

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    Big improvement. I much prefer the new keys, and I like how you played with the angle of the A and y. Very effective.

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    Thank you for all the comments. Your positive comments are motivating for me. I attached an image including some of the places where are logo is used. This is where I feel thinks start to fall apart. I thought I would post my most recent attempt and see what everyone thinks. The business card has changed slightly... was wondering what you would recommend for the text size Toon?
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    What people don't realize is you can go incredibly small with type on a business card address without it being an issue, the last lot I did used 5.5pt text, what is your at?

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