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Old 09-11-2007, 06:26 PM
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Default Derby Parkout Logo. Comments please.



What are your thoughts? How can I improve it?

Thanks in advance.
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Logo is fine but the text just doesn't tie in enough with it for me
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I used the same text as i did on the P & the D. Couldnt find another one that looked good. Any thoughts on what font to use then toon?
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It's not the font completly it's the placement, shrink it down to the size of a business card and the text will become unreadable
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ar yer good point. Dont know where to put the text so it doesnt look out of place though.
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i've done in pc i dont have my macbook so i dont have proper fonts and stuff. just ideas.

ps. i noticed derby seems like in his nuts dont take it wrong. i didnt noticed that.


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