critiques welcomed

[onesummer]

What do you guys think of this concept? it's for a company that makes a coating substance for lots of types of surfaces and it protects against all kinds of harmful elements

[ianm]

i like the icon, it's nice, not sure about the text, caps are a bit plain - try a different font maybe add some tracking

[Toon]

I like it alot but the tagline font should change a bit from the main text, nice colours

[crazyleaf]

I like it. Good color choice. The text could use a bit of tweaking.

[El Peligroso]

Looks like a solid idea, as above i'd look at the 'Pure Surface Defence' text
Maybe with a script font or something, as a contract to the big bold subject matter

[LaurenMarie]

I'm going to be the nay-sayer. Sorry. I think the graphic you've illustrated is beautiful, but it's not going to work as a logo. What does it look like at half an inch? The details--the white strokes, the transparency--will get lost. Toon also had a good suggestion, make the tag line a different font than the company name. It'll make it and the company name stand out more. I like the colors, too!

[logodesign]

Color choice is very good only text need little balance with your creative icon