Rate my logo

[BJplusMilo21]

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Hi guys,

I am new to graphic designing, so I need your advice on this logo.

The is for a fake company called professional consultants.

http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/a...ilo21/Logo.jpg

What do you guys think, and how can I improve the logo?

please don't hold back on your criticism, as it's the only way that I will learn:

thanks.

[StiligeCecilie]

Well.. I don't really care for the font. It conveys a more casual feeling, than a professional business. The mark really makes me a bit dizzy, it reminds me of hypnotists of some sort?! I don't think you are anywhere near what you want to communicate with this logo. But I think you need to expand your fantasy business and give it a better name, a purpose, a target audience, maybe a product etc etc. This might help you on your way to practise logo design.

You can also find lots of help here! http://www.estetica-design-forum.com...resources.html

Good luck!

[Retromodo]

If you're going to use that font, change it to make the letters look better I've seen it used many times where people have "completed" the letters and it works much better

[Jay]

The font used isn't business like. Do the colours or shapes have any reference?

[Jennifer Clements]

We really need some more information about the company and the message you're trying to convey before judging if it's appropriate or not. If this is supposed to be a corporate logo the colors are definitely way too bright and juvenile...

[Cwilk]

Makes me think of Tron. Not much creativity.

[BJplusMilo21]

Here is my second attempt of making the logo what do you guys think?

http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/a...ilo21/Mark.jpg

and the best way to
consulting, would be business consulting E.G Customer service, turnover, factors effecting income, employee performance etc

Note: I completely redesigned the logo

[StiligeCecilie]

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You shouldn't be using gradients, reflections, drop shadow, glow etc, when designing a logo. It's not the effects that makes a logo, it's the shape itself. When you design, start in black and white, so you are focusing on the mark and type.

This is not a logo, it's some sort of "graphic". And it's not even a good one.

I'm suspecting you didn't even look at the link I provided earlier. There are several articles on logo creation, and I will try linking directly to those:
Eight Helpful Rules for Logo Designers - Speckyboy Design Magazine
Design a Logo – The Ultimate Guide - You The Designer | You The Designer
What makes a good logo? | David Airey, graphic designer
12 Logo Design Mistakes To Avoid | JUST
45 Rules for Creating a Great Logo Design. By Tanner Christensen.
My identity design process | David Airey, graphic designer

PLEASE, at least read these! There are more links for you here: http://www.estetica-design-forum.com...resources.html.