Love the strength of that. Helvetica works wonders.
Love the strength of that. Helvetica works wonders.
I think I need to bring the spacing in a touch
Not much though. The ident could do with moving closer more than the text IMO.
Not keen on it. Read it as e.e.n. initially despite the thread title.
The L is getting lost in the red box. I would like to see the L in red without the box and the tracking on the ‘een’ pulled much tighter.
The tagline is also much too small and cramped. It will disappear altogether if it gets any smaller. It's vertical alignment doesn't feel right either.
:D
wow I should have put in the crit section after all that!![]()
If you post it, I will critique it. There's too many sections on here anyway. I get lost sometimes.
Not great for a designer though if a piece of work is finished the client has paid and they've posted it in a non crit section and another designer tears it to pieces. Could cause upset with the client to see his brand spanking new design being slated already, the sections are there for a reason, not to confuse just to avoid conflict.
Similar to people who post a link to a clients site then after it ends up number one in google they want it removing, gotta love google
"I don't build sites that validate, I prefer to charge the client extra when they break!"
Well in future post all your work in critiques first so I can slate it before it goes out to the client. ;)
I am in love with that. The l works really well, and its just the correct amount of "subtleness"
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