Crtics for my Logo

[sweetfeetjaded]

just wanna see the opinions on my logo.

view here:
Randomgraph studios

[Toon]

Looks nice, try spacing the letters out evenly

[zumojuice]

Looking good.

[blueocto]

I'm not if the 'm' works in 'random' i would try and make the gap smaller, or try rounding the corner off a bit, as it kinda looks like two seperate elements at the moment

[sweetfeetjaded]

hmmm, alright i shall put that into consideration. Really thanks for the advice :)

[Carolus]

It has great look. But I would really try to make graph more noticable, it gets a bit lost at the first read, at least for me ;-)

[flick]

yeah it's looking nice, defo need to checkout your letter spacing though, it's a bit random ;)

[sweetfeetjaded]

Originally Posted by flick

yeah it's looking nice, defo need to checkout your letter spacing though, it's a bit random ;)

thanks! its good that you say its random, thats my message. haha, anyway im gonna reedit my spacing.

Hope to see more critics!

[smydesigner]

I like the use of typography for random - the rest of the type looks to weak at the end. Also, how will this look on business card size - will all type stay together? This trick helps me see the comparison of type strength - or you can just step back about 5ft :)

Happy to see what ya come up with :)

yoks

[paddy]

Originally Posted by Toon

Looks nice

It doesn't really. It looks fairly messy and ‘graph’ is nearly impossible to see in that colour.

I'm wondering how much thought has gone into this. What's the relevance of the name? It's a bit clumsy and if it has no relevance to the services you might think about changing it to something a bit more accessible. ‘Random’ gives a lot of negative connotations that you may not wish to associate yourself with. It's also one of the most over-used and persistently mis-used words I can think of. So my advice, first of all, would be to rename.

Your letterforms are nice, if a little tired, but they seem a bit meaningless. They are quite precise and geometric, yet the name is ‘random graph studios’. If you are set on the name why not have random letter forms? Why not explore the graph aspect in more depth?

Your logo should be distinct and memorable. At the moment it's neither of these.

Sorry for the long rambling post.

Good luck!