Crtics for my Logo

[sweetfeetjaded]

Originally Posted by paddy

It doesn't really. It looks fairly messy and ‘graph’ is nearly impossible to see in that colour.

I'm wondering how much thought has gone into this. What's the relevance of the name? It's a bit clumsy and if it has no relevance to the services you might think about changing it to something a bit more accessible. ‘Random’ gives a lot of negative connotations that you may not wish to associate yourself with. It's also one of the most over-used and persistently mis-used words I can think of. So my advice, first of all, would be to rename.

Your letterforms are nice, if a little tired, but they seem a bit meaningless. They are quite precise and geometric, yet the name is ‘random graph studios’. If you are set on the name why not have random letter forms? Why not explore the graph aspect in more depth?

Your logo should be distinct and memorable. At the moment it's neither of these.

Sorry for the long rambling post.

Good luck!

No worries :) What you said made sense to0. It was beacuse i was brain storming for a few couple of names and you know sometimes when your mind really goes blank and cant really think of a good name and sensible one that you will end up with this.

thanks for your critic, really appreciate it:)