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Old 11-02-2007, 02:13 PM
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This a a comp I'm working on, but I'm just a bit worried that it's far too dark... any thoughts? :

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Looks fine here, more dark greys than black.
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i think its very good
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I like it, the green looks a bit dull but that could be my screen.
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The green is a little bit earthed by the other colours, I will definitely change that, thanks Laura.

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Looks alright, but I don't like that reflection of "Detriot". It looks more like it's saying "Deikoii" than a reflection. At least, it does to me.

The text is too grouped together - wack up the line height to make it a million times easier to read.

Other than that, it's coming on well!
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I think it's nice, I love black and green
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Looks good here too. Not too dark.
A bit more contrast maybe?
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Certainly not too dark, but I would suggest that the tonal range is too narrow.
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