1st design project, needs help. please critique.

[Cwilk]

Welcome to the board Matt....

I took a look at your brochure a little too late, but I noticed that your cover needs color correction very much. I agree with the others on H&Js and also needing some more breathing room for your type.

The type looks a little large for a standard reading size. Should be 12pt down to 9pt (depending on the font). Since you're doing this in Photoshop, your black solids (in large areas) need to be a Rich Black and not 100% K.

Also when you do a custom fold like the one you have, be careful of the text going over both sides because it might not always line up if they cut even just a hair off.

I notice to that you already have lots of photos of the Harris store. You really only need one good photo to probably use on the inside. I like some of the cover ideas you've been given by other designers on here.

Otherwise, looks fine.