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[Carrotnapper]

how many of these have i posted lol

well anyway, feedback required:

Thomas Spray: Freelance Designer

cheers guys.

[LeadMagnet]

I don't really like it.
The 'recent work' section looked like some advert at first.
The sub-headings should stand out a bit more.
The navigation buttons don't stand out enough either. Looks like just regular text.
I would suggest using a slightly lighter colour of text (washed out grey or blue maybe).

Overall the whole thing appears cluttered to me.

[Toon]

The one small point I notice straight away from your sites is the text is always too large. What do you set it at? Do you have a large monitor that makes it look ok? I'm just interested because it's always my first crit about your sites?

[Carrotnapper]

it's set at the default size for text.

[Toon]

I'd set it yourself then use % or em on the other text size

[ianm]

yes, i agree that your text does seem large; also;

it does seem cluttered

your navigation rollovers make the page move up and down which is quite odd

i'm not entirely keen on your header/banner, i think the text is overpowering as well as being in an odd typeface and agree that it should be in lighter colours on the black background

[Carrotnapper]

changed it to 14px now, check it out. Thomas Spray: Freelance Designer

[Carrotnapper]

Originally Posted by LeadMagnet

I don't really like it.
The 'recent work' section looked like some advert at first.
The sub-headings should stand out a bit more.
The navigation buttons don't stand out enough either. Looks like just regular text.
I would suggest using a slightly lighter colour of text (washed out grey or blue maybe).

Overall the whole thing appears cluttered to me.

thanks for the critique, anything you could suggest to sort these things out? thanks mate.

[ianm]

not working here mate

[Carrotnapper]

the url is: Thomas Spray: Freelance Designer