Game Key District

[Alex*]

I had some time on my hands so i had a quick go for this competition and i came up with this concept i have positioned the three letters to make one happy gamer one angry gamer one with a smile one with a frown and if you can see it has the basic shape of a keyhole well thats what i can see lol

[29FIVE Designs]

I'm not seeing it... The second one looks like it could be a person, but I had to think about it first. Maybe I'm just dull though.

[Alex*]

and another one for collin wray

[ianm]

nope, i can't see it either, what's the first one supposed to be? and the collin wray one is just wrong - i have no idea what the c and w are supposed to represent, but it's ugly and the word spacing between "colin" and "wray" is way too much

[Alex*]

ever heard of constructive criticism the first one as i have said represents a gamer and if you look in the white space between the c and the w guess what i can see a keyhole

[ianm]

hey, i said what i think about the logos and elements that can be improved, if you get upset at that you won't cope very well working under a creative director or studio boss.

[Alex*]

yeh but when a kid like me shows a logo don't have a go at it and say its ugly say the good bits and where you can improve and i don't reckon i will be work under a studio boss for lets say another 13 odd years

[Toon]

I like your Hardan tag ribbon very creative mate.

[Alex*]

lol thanks toon just thought i would state who created the designs show them that they are indeed copyrighted

[ianm]

Originally Posted by hardan.co.k

yeh but when a kid like me shows a logo don't have a go at it and say its ugly say the good bits and where you can improve and i don't reckon i will be work under a studio boss for lets say another 13 odd years

ok, then, the keyhole "c" and "w" thing is ugly because it's big - bigger than the actual company name, secondly the keyhole takes away the fact it's supposed o be a c and a w. thirdly, the word spaceing between the "colin" and "wray" is too much

that better for you?