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Old 17-07-2008, 04:47 AM
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Dear everyone,

Here is my blog website:
http://creativityportfolio.blogspot.com/
I’ve already posted a lot of graphic design of myself. Some are for fun, some designs are for exercises at college.
I would like to share with you guys and listen to feedback comments from all of you to improve myself more.
Thanks and regards,

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Old 17-07-2008, 10:29 AM
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You have some escaping elements at the foot

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I like the colors and such, but there are some things awry there. The header seems to be cut in half, and the nav on the side seems to be cramped.

One of your images doesn't show and it turns to a white square that comes out of the frame a bit, and as lolly pointed out, the foot.

Nice artwork!
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A good start though I think you should work more on the blog as well as on your art style. I mean both the blog design and the code seem unfinished. Also avoid using so many Photoshop effects on your pieces - try some textures or brushes. Hope that makes sense. :)
Wish you good luck!!!
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Old 21-07-2008, 01:45 AM
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thank you so much



The empty image is because the server that formerly host that empty image not operate anymore :). I removed that post
I also wanna ask:
do u know how to let other design blogger add my blog to their blog list (dash board) so that they and I could comment each other regularly? I don't know how to search for other blog
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I am not sure if you changed it since the earlier replies, but it appears you have by an image from lolly. I am not too fond of the blue on blue for your page. Since the background is blue, and the background of the text areas is blue - it takes away the natural division of the elements. You should consider making at least a border of the different articles, and also making a slightly different shade of blue for their background if you want to keep the same theme. This way, it makes it easier for people to read.
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Old 09-11-2008, 09:18 AM
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Excellent blog! Interesting article and very informative! I will necessarily subscribe for this blog.
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I don't see any design work done. Is there supposed to be something creative there? Maybe I just didn't look deep enough.
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I don't see any design work done. Is there supposed to be something creative there? Maybe I just didn't look deep enough.
Same here, I can only see the default theme from Blogger?
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I'm assuming by Lolly's post that the design was different when it was posted.
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