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Old 19-04-2008, 12:15 PM
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First post here, so apologies for committing the sin of requesting some help. Not a webdesigner and not a graphic designer and thesedays, when every man and his dog who has a computer seems to be calling themselves that, I don't think I could ever bring myself to those lows. So I'm coming to the professionals for a bit of advice.

Making my first website for the place I work (yup, man many problems but you know), and I'm finally starting to get the thing working. Problem is, the top header I made just feels prety bare and uninteresting. I'm not afraid of white space at all, just feels like it lacks something.

So I was just wondering if anyone here had any ideas of what to do with it?

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Old 19-04-2008, 01:12 PM
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To be, it appears good. If you're afraid there is too much, once your links are in, you could incase them (but them in a bar or button or soemthing and make them clearer) which would reduce it a little.

Otherwsie, just reduce the whitespace little, and perhaps lose the logo reflection...
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The copy could do with a good read..

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Also the use of uppercase and lowercase mixed is not a good way to write
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i would move navigation to the black bar under the header.
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I agree with Toon here,
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I think you can move the links on white to some other place, rest looks pretty decent to me!
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i think it is not bad, tha way it is...maby if you think it is to empty, you could try to put a pattern in the white insted of those line, that would fil up the place more. I'm seeing it as a transparant pattern, maby with an alfa value of 8%....

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