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Old 19-03-2008, 05:55 AM
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Hello this is Jon, I have this site, it talks about all type of software. Please review it and advice, is there any improvement I can do to it? Thanks for your kind help. BTW which shopping cart is best for online download software sites?
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Deja-Vu - have you not already posted this for feedback?
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Hello...

I kind of had an overview of your Web Site..its Okay...I found it a little cluttered.. too much stuff on the same page... I like the Article section though...however..it needs to be organised well.

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Sapphire Parker
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Font needs hierarchy, you have a lot of things going on at once, I personally found it hard to focus on anything, might want to play with another color scheme. You used some colors in your logo but that was about it. Also since your using tables to display your items, make one row hold the image and the next the information and lastly the last one hold the buttons. I also I do not think that the images of the camera, phone and screen are needed there, it looks like the name of your company should go there along with your contact info. Keep playing with the spacing of your objects and try some other color schemes.
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