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Old 18-03-2008, 06:03 PM
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HI, i made this image today in an attempt to feel creative.
I like it although I feel there's something missing, u know that feeling?

I 'm looking forward to any feedback. I'm tough so hit me with all you've got!

Many thanks, peace and destruction
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Old 18-03-2008, 06:04 PM
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I would say the color needs bringing up a bit more to contrast with the darkness
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Old 18-03-2008, 06:08 PM
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deffo a touch dark at the mo
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Possibly tone down the background red/yellow so it's more muted. That should also help the main colours stand out.
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yeah, play with the balance a little
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I agree with the above critiques, but also take a look at your string of color moving up to the left hand corner....it makes your eye movement go in that area and takes you totally out of your composition and into nothingness. That may be what's messing with you.
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