leaflet

[mary-jo]

i have done this leafletfor a friend and as it's one of my first 'real life' pieces of work i would be greatful for any words of constructive criticism.
As it's the first one uploaded on this forum sorry if the size isn't right.

[mary-jo]

yep, definitely size problems...will try again

[zumojuice]

A bit of colour would really set this off I think. Not too much. The palettes all just a bit too grey if you get me?

[Toon]

Yeah it's nice, you could try a little green a bit like this...



Adds a nice touch to the grey tones

[mary-jo]

The salon is quite minimalistic with grey wallpapers and black decor and my friend only wanted two-colour leaflet to cut down the cost of printing, maybe adding white can cheer things up??

[zumojuice]

Maybe yeah, toning down the gradient a little (so its a darker shade to black) and using white should really punch out a little more.

A darkened grey tone, with lighter swirls (much like the 'good' on the sample Toon has posted) and white text could be a really clean and effective leaflet.