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Old 07-03-2008, 08:42 AM
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Old 07-03-2008, 08:57 AM
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I like it a lot, especially the colours. Maybe make the o look more like an o?

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Good one.
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looks great, i wonder what it would look like with 'the' and 'room' in a heavier weight and glamour in a lighter one?
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Old 07-03-2008, 11:00 AM
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Very feminine and graceful
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reads a little like glam fur, although when you do the double take it becomes obvious what it is. Maybe have 'the' & 'room' in caps
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cud u try make the swirl tighter more like an O shape, not that obvious currently... and the 'the' and 'room' id like to be heavier
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Agreed with the "o" I do like the symbol though so I'd try force it into more of an o shape. Or have the symbol as the negative space in an "o" shape (Hope I'm making sense).
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Very good Toon. I'd perhaps play with the swirl to thicken the stroke of it around the base and close it in to form a more obvious 'o'.
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Looks like glamfur
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