Graphic Design Forum and Web Design Forum  

Go Back   Graphic Design Forum and Web Design Forum »General »Graphic Design & Web Design Critique

Notices

Graphic Design & Web Design Critique Get Critique from other designers on your graphic & web designs


Reply
 
LinkBack (1) Thread Tools Display Modes
  1 links from elsewhere to this Post. Click to view. #1 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 02:10 AM
Experienced Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Toronto
Posts: 221
Default Web page Logo

Take a look, let me know
Christopher "the creative sheep" web site .... to come!
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 06:30 AM
Mchilly's Avatar
Lazy Mortal
 
Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 129
Default

Is that your website? The text is huge It looks boring
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 08:33 AM
zumojuice's Avatar
100% Freshly Squeezed™
 
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: York
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,910
Default

Nothing is really making me excited about the launch here. As a logo or banner, it is simply a little flat and boring. The 'christopher' is a bit too close to the text for my liking and the sheep figure is that is what it is, needs to be more clearly defined.

If anything, this just looks like text, and not really a logo at all.
__________________
Richard Gray
http://www.zumojuice.me.uk
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 02:13 PM
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 3
Default

Is that a leprechaun sitting on the C?
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 03:05 PM
Experienced Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Toronto
Posts: 221
Default

Maybe I should have been more descriptive the text is huge on purpose, second it is a silhoutte, and because it's a silhouette it should answer the leprechaun question.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 03:27 PM
zumojuice's Avatar
100% Freshly Squeezed™
 
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: York
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,910
Default

Well it can be huge and silhouetted. Nothing wrong with that as such, but this is not really speaking to me at present.
__________________
Richard Gray
http://www.zumojuice.me.uk
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #7 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 04:42 PM
Experienced Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Toronto
Posts: 221
Default

What is the logo suppose to say ? From the others logos I've seen they don't really say much besides showing a single or double letter representing something.

Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #8 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 05:06 PM
zumojuice's Avatar
100% Freshly Squeezed™
 
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: York
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,910
Default

There is a 'little' more to logo design than that. The issue I am having is that the 'the' is lost in the curve of the 'C' and your name looks like it has been stuck on badly, rather than supposed to be there.

Frankly, to be clear, I'd go with just 'the creative sheep'.
__________________
Richard Gray
http://www.zumojuice.me.uk
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #9 (permalink)  
Old 06-03-2008, 05:25 PM
Toon's Avatar
Netvibes is an Addiction™
 
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Sheffield, UK
Gender: Male
Posts: 17,273
Default

If motion graphics is what you're really good at why not hire a logo designer to do that part for you?
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
  #10 (permalink)  
Old 07-03-2008, 12:54 AM
Experienced Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Toronto
Posts: 221
Default

Zumo - Alright you have made yourself a little clearer, I see what you mean in regards to the word "the" and the name "Christopher". I will admit the word "Christopher" was just plopped there, this can and was going to be adjusted, to be frank the whole logo was going to be adjusted I just wanted to get viewer feedback on the generalization of the logo, I can fix up the logo therefore omitting the need for a logo designer.
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in Technorati Share This Article & VoteReddit! Wong this Post!Stumble this Post!RSS Share on FacebookForum Netvibes Page
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
My copyright right moves slightly from page to page? ewwatson CSS Forum 6 14-03-2008 01:44 AM
Page Rank Toon Search Engines 5 27-01-2008 12:06 AM
need web page the ny lady Design Forum Employment 18 26-01-2008 03:38 PM
Page Rank Laura Lynne Search Engines 7 19-02-2007 08:30 AM
1st css page Toon CSS Forum 4 11-01-2007 09:05 PM


All times are GMT. The time now is 08:50 PM.



Estetica Design Forum's Privacy Policy
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.2.0 RC5