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link?? or do you want me to try to google it
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ehhh.. its OK. not really a big fan. It's VERY boxy & electric blue and not much going on.
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I'm going to be very blunt, because I don't believe in molly coddling amateur designers.
The design is very poor. The colours are weak and boring, and there's not really any page design to speak off; just a white box and a poorly optimised slideshow. It sounds clichéd, but look at other sports and leisure club sites you find attractive and try to pin down why you like them. RedGate: Home is a good example. Don't scroll content in divs unless you absolutely have to give it a fixed height. It's unattractive and unintuitive. Try to keep you layout the same on each page. Changing the layout between pages decreases the usability of the site. You could probably lose the forum as well, as I can't see many members of Warrenpoint's boating community spending much time there. TO DO:
To end on a positive side, your code is nice and tidy and a day spent sailing in Warrenpoint with the members of the boat club is a day well spent. I had great fun last time I was there.
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Hi mate,
First off, listen to the advice so far as it's sound, and will put you on the right course. I'd work with simplicity as your main theme. Clean, flat colours (no gradients) might work best. When I put the logo together for you I put it on a white background so the icon would stand out. However, if you want it on blue look at the attached image. Basically go for a minimal look, but no half-way-house. Don't just use black text, have a think about using grey to soften the appearance. Oh and don't use any keylines on the logo! ;-) As for the front page of the site - think high impact visually. Have a huge picture / series of pics and keep the info to a smaller side column. The first impression should be an inspiring pic that really shows off the place. Oh yeah, don't advertise yourself on the front page (bit tacky), save that for the 'contact' section. Good luck! |
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