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Old 27-02-2008, 11:58 PM
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I'm in the process of trying to get a reasonable portfolio put together, so these aren't really for any clients, they're just for fun. haha. Done in Illy, freehand, yadda. Any opinions welcome!



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Old 28-02-2008, 12:13 AM
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I really like this. Other than the bottom left where the fonts a little thin. I prefer it as the black outline. I think you could have real fun developing the ident with symbols like the heart.
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Old 28-02-2008, 01:04 AM
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I enjoy the one with the heart. I think it would be really cool if you just had him holding, maybe an artist's palette, with some cool paint dabs on it.
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Old 02-03-2008, 02:43 AM
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The one with the heart is solid, I wouldn't add anything. The clean appearance is light and airy exactly what a ghost should be.
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Maybe the shape can be altered a bit? - just my 2 cents . Great logo though!
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Yeah, shape looks like a white leaf or something.
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Tweaked the shape just a little bit. Didn't realize it was so "geometric" up top until I read those posts. Thanks for all of the great input, I'm pretty happy with it now. :)

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