Possible Job

[Candra]

Here is a booklet that I'm making for a possible job





What do you think?

[Toon]

Be careful with the kerning on some of the text, it is very uneven, pick a font with good kerning or you will have to amend it manually

[zumojuice]

Ok - few simple things. Can the map be more in keeping with the design? Maybe a greener version even if you have to redraw it (if its worth it cost wise of course).

Other main thing would be to give the table some space. It looks a little crammed into that white box to me, and would benefit from a little space between sections, and around the edge. Not much, as its fairly much there, but just a little while you can.

Otherwise, seems to be going right