Job- need crits

[Candra]

Hello, I'm doing this for a possible job, need crits
I was told what words to go on it, so that isn't up to me
here is the front/back





thanks:)

[Toon]

I would use more padding around the text, some of it is too close to the edges

[lolly]

Try and use fewer fonts, 2 is more than enough

[flick]

also use a nicer font the standard 'handwriting' fonts always look pretty cheesy i think. nice work on the hair :)

[ifohdesigns]

Originally Posted by flick

also use a nicer font the standard 'handwriting' fonts always look pretty cheesy i think. nice work on the hair :)

I completely agree. Hand writing fonts look awful. No 2 letters should look exactly the same when you are hand writing.