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01-02-2008, 12:53 PM
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school project
Good morning all,
yeah I doing a school project creating a fake kitchenware site and I'm having a little trouble getting the title to flow a little better, and looking for some critiques and ideas. Mind the color swatch bars they won't be there when finished. thanks a lot. project
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Farmhouse Suicide Clothing Co. Last edited by farmhouse; 01-02-2008 at 01:05 PM. Reason: oops forgot the link           
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01-02-2008, 01:01 PM
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have you got a link?
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04-02-2008, 03:44 AM
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yeah i forgot the link about i guess and fixed it but heres the link again, need some input.
http://www.farmhousesuicide.com/layout.png
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04-02-2008, 03:52 AM
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The Text/ Links are big
Try to pick a better color combo, (less colors may help) Try to work on the logo, hurts to look at, less colorful. And the yellow text is hard to read.
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04-02-2008, 06:18 AM
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I'm glad you said that... i was already working on shrinking it way down... the whole title doesn't settle with me at all... not sure what to do, thinking of adding some ,and i quote "sale sale sale" type lol. i changed it up a little bit.. so let me know..
colors aren't really an issue, i feel they're mine... header is crap though... i need some ideas
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