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Old 01-02-2008, 12:53 PM
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yeah I doing a school project creating a fake kitchenware site and I'm having a little trouble getting the title to flow a little better, and looking for some critiques and ideas. Mind the color swatch bars they won't be there when finished. thanks a lot.

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have you got a link?
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yeah i forgot the link about i guess and fixed it but heres the link again, need some input.

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The Text/ Links are big
Try to pick a better color combo, (less colors may help)
Try to work on the logo, hurts to look at, less colorful. And the yellow text is hard to read.
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I'm glad you said that... i was already working on shrinking it way down... the whole title doesn't settle with me at all... not sure what to do, thinking of adding some ,and i quote "sale sale sale" type lol. i changed it up a little bit.. so let me know..

colors aren't really an issue, i feel they're mine... header is crap though... i need some ideas
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