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Old 23-01-2008, 03:24 PM
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Thought I'd better ask for a bit of crit on this before I get too far into the design...

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A few people have already seen it and gave me pointers but it's always nice to hear others first impressions on designs before it gets too far into the site build.
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excellent job so far Toon!
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looks good, not too sure about the red dots on top of the photos though
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You need to change the cursor to a pointer on the nav. I'd also give the
  • s in the footer a display:block; It just makes them easier to click. I agree with Prewe as well re the dots. Rest is good though. Like it!
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    looks good, not too sure about the red dots on top of the photos though

    they are drawing pins are they not? i like it its cool. what happened to the blueprint?
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    The guy changed his mind. He didn't like how it looked. I guess it takes away from the text a little.
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    Looks pretty good
    the only thing that bothers me is the font used for
    entertainment, automation and efficiency for your home...


    it looks very jagged.
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    Yeah I'm thinking Trebuchet Italic is a little funny on some systems, might be a good idea to use plain Trebuchet
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    design looks great toon, but it doesn't seem to validate in css or xhtml.
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