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Old 16-02-2007, 02:40 PM
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Need a bit of crit on these cards....I'm not happy with bottom right. Address font? Too much space?

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Old 16-02-2007, 02:51 PM
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Nice design but just seems to be too much of the pale pink area. Perhaps put a swirly pattern of some sort through it in white or an even lighter pink? The size of the address text is fine and the font looks ok to me, just too much space around.
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Old 16-02-2007, 03:02 PM
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More subtle colors better or worse...

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Old 16-02-2007, 03:45 PM
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Tried some different colours...

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Old 16-02-2007, 10:19 PM
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Tried some different colours...
This is my fav so far, not sure about the position of the top text though :unsure:
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Old 16-02-2007, 10:23 PM
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Looking good Toon, like the extra colour in there in the third version.
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Old 16-02-2007, 10:30 PM
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I prefer the extra colour text isn't my choice mick, it's a logo aparently I hated it at first but it's growing on me maybe just cause it's different, we don't have enough text running off the page these days! lol
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one thing I noticed, with it having a picture of a lady on and the pink colors it looked very female targeted but the blue and red style looks for universal. if that makes any sence
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whats 'opengorge' trying to say about themselves?
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one thing I noticed, with it having a picture of a lady on and the pink colors it looked very female targeted but the blue and red style looks for universal. if that makes any sence
I agree, though the first design (as a design) was in my opinion better.
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