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Old 30-11-2007, 04:43 PM
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This is a first draught i have created, the music player wont be the MySpace one as its only there for illustrative purposes.

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Looks nice, I like the colours, the content needs centrering apart from that nice stuff
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Old 01-12-2007, 08:11 PM
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Anyone else have any feedback?
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Looks fine... very "myspace" though.

I would just hope that you use clean & proper code in the end.
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Yeah well I am beginning to run all of my code through the W3C validator so my code is as correct as possible!
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outstanding then... keep it up
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have you played with a center design vs left? I like the colors but I think the layout needs to be re-thought
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I will try a centered design, would you recommend a background for the centered content?

I'm not sure as I think the gradient sits behind it well.
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I will try a centered design, would you recommend a background for the centered content?

I'm not sure as I think the gradient sits behind it well.
maybe keep the gradient for the content and add some sort of pattern for the background. Like a retro fabric design.
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