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Old 28-11-2007, 05:17 PM
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So what do you guys think?

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Old 28-11-2007, 05:40 PM
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Only two things that would change if I was capable of creating work as good as that....I'de move the speech bubble slightly to the right and rotate it slightly anti-clockwise - the other thing would be to add a small glint/shining star on a corner of the golden "TALK" text...

Otherwise though...I like it!!!
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Old 28-11-2007, 08:42 PM
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Not sure what its promoting, but I find the character black and white a tad odd, I would colour that if you can?
Also "treasure" seems to be too small enough to be relevant? If its called "talk treasure" I would get the text looking more in relation to eachother.
As the heirachy is "Talk" then 'character' then "treasure" at the moment...
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Old 28-11-2007, 11:39 PM
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I like it but agree the character could use some colour.

It looks a bit like Mickey Mouse actually. Did you intend it to be? If its a parody great! If not you might have the Disney lawyers after you
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Old 29-11-2007, 12:33 AM
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Well basically, it was just a quick sample for a client, they said they wanted something "Fun" so i decided to go with a cartoon character and used some origniality, however i enjoy the black and white montage to the cartoon character, and when i was getting ready to add color, i really looked at it and thought it had a post modern look. something new-old and flashy perhaps.

But the client basically shot the idea down. wanted something alot more simple and boring.

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the character looks like micky mouse with longer ears
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Old 29-11-2007, 01:58 PM
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Could lead to a court case that, it's way too similar
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Could lead to a court case that, it's way too similar
that Walt Diseny...suing people from from his cryogenic freezer...
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