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Hello,
I've just design the first version of the visual interface for a social community site for business. I'm very glad to receive critique feedback from you. Thanks a lot for your help. Kind regards, Hung
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It looks fine apart from the heavy borders I would make them more subtle. Instead of grey use only a slightly darker blue that the darkest part of the centre grad.
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I think the contrast between the main text and the background is way to low and I also think that the bottom links and copyright text could have been alot smaller.
Same with those list arrows, they steal alot of my attention... and this is only a bad thing if that not was you intend to do so. One last thing, you could skip some of the gradients as well. It's just too much of that IMO.
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the way it's laid out and with all the images that are going to be requited to be loaded it's gonna take a while to render that beast in a browser. couple seconds at least. business people tend to have the shortest attention spans of any other demographic so you gotta pare that down a bit. you don't really need all the borders or have them be rounded. white space can visually separate just as well as borders and lines.
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Hello,
I've just added one banner on top to make the page looks more attracting. I also make few changes to the colour of the page. This is the second version of the this page. How do you think about it? Thanks for support. H
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I would use a more solid colour for the header make it stand out
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the banner is too large... you loose information above the fold because of it and it doesn't really add anything to the site.
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