typography critics please

[korhan]

A typography book named "Tipografi 13"

of course theyre not even close to be done. i believe thyre at their %20 of it progress.



i had another at my home ill uload it too later

[Toon]

I would love to see the middle one but with transparent fills and a grey thinner stroke

A little like this kind of style...



The letter shapes are really good

[ianm]

i like the first two examples, the first one i like the best though with the two tone, i think the stroke on the second example is nice and strong.

looking good :)

[strev]

I like toons ammendment to your 2nd concept.
All 3 are good designs. Nice work.

[korhan]

thanks for the advises

@toon ill try and post here what you said sounds&seems nice (but tomorrow)

this is the other one (three in one) but this one looks like a MAGAZINE logo not a book logo (ok im confused)