Review my Website

[Touseef Design]

Please Review my website

Touseef Design


thanks

[jontywagener]

quite nice...

whats the leaf for by the way??

[Touseef Design]

well, the leaf represents lot things. it represents Peace in design, simple and clear design, and also represents design.

[Arkady]

The text is all too small and spidery, making it a chore to read and there appears to be some text on the landing page that I can't read at all. It may be that you have designed this site on a lower resolution monitor. If so I would suggest taking a look on a monitor set at least 1280 x 1024 and you'll see what I mean. Remeber too that other peoples eyesight may not be as good as yours, including anyone over 45. One other thing. It would a really good idea, if you can arrange it , to get a native English speaker to re-draft the text for you. Reading the copy on your site the language and grammar jars somewhat and becomes a distraction. All in all, these things serve to make your site quite hard work and that's not going to help you hold on to your visitors.

[PR Design]

Originally Posted by Arkady

The text is all too small and spidery, making it a chore to read and there appears to be some text on the landing page that I can't read at all. It may be that you have designed this site on a lower resolution monitor. If so I would suggest taking a look on a monitor set at least 1280 x 1024 and you'll see what I mean. Remeber too that other peoples eyesight may not be as good as yours, including anyone over 45. One other thing. It would a really good idea, if you can arrange it , to get a native English speaker to re-draft the text for you. Reading the copy on your site the language and grammar jars somewhat and becomes a distraction. All in all, these things serve to make your site quite hard work and that's not going to help you hold on to your visitors.

Agreed.

[Zaoris]

I kinda agree with Arkady also but still..good work!

[tommylogic]

I can't believe it took you 211 lines to achieve THIS...

oh well....

Markup Validation: FAILED 28 Errors and NO DOCTYPE Found??? WTF??

Amazingly enough .. your 12 lines of CSS is Valid.... hmmph

[strev]

Originally Posted by Touseef Design

well, the leaf represents lot things. it represents Peace in design, simple and clear design, and also represents design.

Chronically correct answer ; )

[SuperSmash]

Also, the clouds/sky at the top start to tile if you open your browser window wide enough; might wanna figure out some solution to that... Non-repetitive pictures that span the page can be annoying sometimes.

[Reemo]

Seems ok to me nothing special, nice brochure work though