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Old 26-09-2007, 10:49 AM
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Old 26-09-2007, 11:45 AM
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can i just ask, how many logo posts you are going to go through? two of those are already featured in threads you started. the first one - that idea is too generic for a start, i'm certain i've seen other logos like that on the web
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Sorry about the repetative posts, i just want to know your thoughts and they are a little different.
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okay I'm sorry if this may seem a little harsh but I don't know your back ground and heres my honest opinion:

logo1 - This looks too much like jobserve.com.
logo2 - Complete rip off of JJB (does anyone else see this??) Need a new idea
logo3 - What is this for? I'm not sure what is suppose to represent
logo4 - The idea is there, its not particularly original, but it is not executed well.

Can i ask what these are for? I really think you need to think about typography, do a little research into the brands you are designing for and look at relavent imagery. Perhaps try experimenting with different colours? What have you used to put these together?

Sara :)

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Old 26-09-2007, 12:54 PM
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3rd one reminds me of

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Old 26-09-2007, 01:00 PM
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isnt that color blue © 2007 by toon?

they are essentially all the same thing.
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poppin back I get ya
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poppin back I get ya
confused :S :)
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Thanks for all your comments, i'm tring my best to get better at this & appreciate all the comments and feedback.
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confused :S :)
I think maybe

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