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Old 18-09-2007, 04:40 PM
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Default Logo Critique, please :: Wrist It

Logo for wrist accessory that wraps around your wrist and holds your phone, keys, credit cards, and money and free up your hands so you can be active. Three versions attached (if I did it right!).

I have a difficult time with logos -- I think because they seem so final. There's always an updated brochure to be designed -- but the logo is to live on indefinitely -- SO much pressure! Please critique...I'd appreciate it!

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Old 18-09-2007, 04:46 PM
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i like the middle one most but perhaps the first one is more suited to the product - it would look good as a tag
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Old 18-09-2007, 04:49 PM
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The first is by far the best, simple, strong colours
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First one for me too
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Definately first one, good colours and a nice look!
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1: Nice and strong, good colours. Go for it.
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I would go with the first too.
Do something more with that second i. Let it break the base line, having the dot below. Or maybe cut the now top of the i so its the same height as the t?

Just needs something more than round corners and tight kerning to seal seal the deal.

The second is also on a good path but is second right now. the 2 elements are taking form the title a little higherarchy seems reversed. Maybe a different font that is close to that one may set it off.

the third
good as a burnt terd
Just playing but it is on a differnet level than the other two.
And i mean a lower one.
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Old 21-09-2007, 11:01 PM
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i agree with flick i choose the second logo's, it's look so powerfull and go for it
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First one I think for me
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im in agreement with most, i like the first two, not sure which i would choose over the other though
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