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Old 16-10-2007, 09:50 PM
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I lost this site for a while, but I found it and I am back! After client deliberation they, of course, chose the one nobody likes. The version with the figure.

I've refined it a bit and would love to get any feedback on how to make it the best it can be:

TIA!
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Old 16-10-2007, 11:25 PM
 
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Very nice and clean - but you seem to be working with raster images - if you're slightly up on your illustrator - i would suggest making them vectors for much cleaner edges.
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Old 16-10-2007, 11:40 PM
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Thanks James -- I appreciate your feedback. I actually created the logo in Illustrator but I put it into Photoshop and created a jpg to post on this site.

Does anyone still think this looks like a "burnt turd" as a pp suggested? :)
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Old 17-10-2007, 12:27 AM
 
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Definitely not a burnt turd lol.
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