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Old 18-09-2007, 12:03 PM
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Could anyone with a bit of spare time please give me some feedback on my new design for PAYPAL-POKER.INFO Play poker and casino with paypal !

Thanks in advance

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Old 18-09-2007, 05:07 PM
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Hi Tommy, I like the simplicity and the illustration. I'm having a hard time really figuring out what the site does (besides reading the tagline) and what I should read first. Generally, if that is the case, then the viewer will just go to another web site. I suggest you create some visual hierarchy and try to guide your viewer's eye to the first most important thing, then the second, etc. Right now, it seems like every element on the page is of the same importance. Hopefully I explained myself okay and this helps you out.
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Old 18-09-2007, 05:14 PM
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Thanks for the reply I built the site for people looking for poker sites accepting paypal as when I search for a similar site i could not find any,
since my site went up another 20 or more sites appeared but I have still earned a little bit of cash from it but not as much as I would have earned had I know about seo and how important it is.

To put it simply the main purpose of the site is to try and get people to join betfair or ladbrokes through my affiliate link.

What am I doing wrong?
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Old 04-12-2007, 12:10 PM
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I think it's way too plain and too many small ads all over the place
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i think the idea is a good one. Way to find niche. But the site isnt user friendly at all. I didnt know what the site did or how to get around in it.

Try building the site through wordpress. Might make it a little more user friendly.
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Yeah, I think you certainly need to reconsider the entire design, layout, presentation... the works. Danny is correct, perhaps a wordpress theme might be a good choice for you.

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