2 logos 4 LogoSauce

[estefanyfranco]

(Now, the right place to post)

Please, could you critique, give me suggestions, tell me what you think about the two logos I submitted at LogoSauce today???
I really want to listen what you have to say.

LogoSauce™ - Station
LogoSauce™ - Mobildelar.se

Thanks...
Estéfany Franco

[brokendalek]

I've got to say I like the second one the best, it's nice and simple with some nice bold shapes and I really like the colours

[estefanyfranco]

Thanks for your comment!
I think it's really positive, because that ones are my first logos for LogoSauce.
=)

[Zaoris]

I really like the first one. The colours are well-combined and the logo has a nice clean look.
As for the second one, I think I don't really like the font.
Good entries though :)

[Dajo]

Awesome, I really like them both! I like the simplicity of the first one and I also like the complexity of the second one. Both are very nice!

[estefanyfranco]

Thanks everybody for your coments!


It was really good to hear all this things. I'm more confident now.

Bye...

[bcopeland]

Station is good the green is a tough call
and on a reverse (your blk Background)
Shouldnt the font and logo be white. Hince reversed.

Anyway I like it. The "Rays" are a little powerfull-could be a focus for you though.
But Hiearchey is neutral. Maybe a little smaller or starting with the dot of the i and a couple smaller duller "Rays"

Mobil
please dont
not bauhaus and mobile phones
thats like scratching a chalk board or a baby whaling on a flight.

Not trying to be crewl but no dont do that.
By the way that is not simple either. Busy, big and heavy.

mobile phones lets think.
on the move, quick, complicated but actually simple.

italics. thin. compresed
these are a few things i would think of for that one.

now. get away from the neon greens and blues