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Old 05-09-2007, 11:22 AM
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What do you think about this one for competition on logosauce.

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Old 05-09-2007, 11:51 AM
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prety basic and obvious, which dependant on what the company are after may be good or bad. however if it is basic and obvious you are going for then i'd tend to stick to two colors on that - the gret .se bit isn't working for me, i like the handset image though, type could be a whole lot better than bauhaus
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colours are a bit spammy. as for font i think berlin sans works
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Old 05-09-2007, 01:52 PM
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cell phone needs some work, cleaned up a bit.
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haha, ive just realised i spelt mobildelar.se wrong, what a tit. anyway, you get the general idea :)
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those fonts are all over, to stand out you need something that is stylish yet a little different
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The phone doesn't use any straight lines! As said, tidy it up, and a bit more detail to make it unique (give it a USP!)
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a usp? what the heck?
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Sorry, Unique Selling Point (something to differentiate it).
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it's not phone it's housing for the mobile phone, that's why i didn't use any straight lines to be different.
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