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Old 05-09-2007, 02:09 AM
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Hey, what do you think of this logo concept for a pie maker/food service? I am not the best at logos and am relatively new to them, so please let me know any of your feedback. Thanks!!

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yeah, interesting concept with the lattice pie but the layout, colours and font definitely need some work in order that it makes me think of pies, is it sweet or savoury pies?
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that light blue need changing, you are right flick and probably font as well.
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Firstly the image in the logo doesn't look like a pie..
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doesn't work, it looks like you stuck a pattern above some blue text and the colours don't work for me
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I would have to agree with Ian, it doesn't say "pies" to me at all. I think you need a round shape and the text should be a variation of the warm hues that you've used in the pie, the blue looks a bit too stark
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my thoughts are also that the type needs to be something different, more distinct, that typeface is too thin and plain
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to flat, try an actual pie.. maybe a bit 3d'ish... make it pop
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Looks like a table cloth :)

When i think pie i think

Round And light brown (earthy tones), Even though pastel blue is a delicious looking color.
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If someone could design a logo (no need for any text as I will add that) for this company that would be great. I will give $20 to the best one (I am being paid $40 for the logo and business card design, which I will do, so get the logo fee).

I need it to be in vector and use earthtones. My client really likes the Aunt Jemima logo. I need it by Saturday Night!!! Please help!
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