Bit of critique if you could....

[SugarSpunSister]

This is my new logo (for my design and illustration work). Somethings not quiet right about it but (after having looked at it for hours on end) I can't figure out what it is. Any ideas?

Ta :)

[strev]

Hiya SSS,

Now these are purely subjective & so take with a grain (or two) of salt...

too many elements are competing for attention-what is the primary element?

"love what you see" should be in an easier to read font

perhaps just one "love eye" would be enough

Cheers, strev

[SugarSpunSister]

Originally Posted by strev

Hiya SSS,

Now these are purely subjective & so take with a grain (or two) of salt...

too many elements are competing for attention-what is the primary element?

"love what you see" should be in an easier to read font

perhaps just one "love eye" would be enough

Cheers, strev

Thanks Strev, I knew I could count on this place for actual critique rather than just "oo thats nice" :)

I agree theres too much going on....give me 5 and I'll work on it...hang on...

[James Jones]

The first eye is great the second eye (eyebrow) doesn't look right, agree the tagline should be in a 'normal' font

[SugarSpunSister]

Any better?

[Kelly Creative]

The text is much better at the bottom

[strev]

For what it's worth.... trying to unify the elements

[prewe]

agreed, only one eye looks better (the one strev edited). though i think you could find an even better font for the bottom text than the three ones here. and the lines on the eye, aren't they a tad thin when printing small?

[strev]

Originally Posted by prewe

agreed, only one eye looks better (the one strev edited). though i think you could find an even better font for the bottom text than the three ones here. and the lines on the eye, aren't they a tad thin when printing small?

agreed. Jeez, how do you find time for critiques when you could be sailing!

[Toon]

Prewe only goes on the pirate ship's for the rum!