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Old 18-08-2007, 08:54 AM
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Default 1st design project, needs help. please critique.

This is my first project that I have ever done as a designer. My job was to create a brochure for a real estate company to send out to try and rent this retail plaza to prospective tenants. The brochure will open like a gate and has a front, inside, and back. I am fairly satisfied with the inside of the brochure, but would love some ideas for the front. I am going brain dead and I need to have this to the printer tomorrow. Please help, it would be greatly appreciated.

Also, please tell me what you would usually charge for something like this, keep in mind I had to get all of the information and take pictures. I cannot charge per hour, because I have probably forty hours in this :0

P.S. if someone wants to do a very very rough edit and send it to my email harris.1168@osu.edu that would be AMAZING! If I use I will send you a cut via paypal if you like.
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Old 18-08-2007, 08:56 AM
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Haven't you just posted this once?
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Old 18-08-2007, 08:58 AM
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yeah, kinda need to finish soon and would like to get the most critiques as possible.
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Old 18-08-2007, 08:59 AM
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People will see it don't worry
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lol, sorry this is the fourth forum i have posted on and this is finally the first forum to respond, so I might have been getting a little carried away. Thanks though.
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Old 18-08-2007, 10:31 AM
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I think the photograph on the front is just a little bit dull, possibly boots the saturation a tiny bit and make it a little brighter.

I really like the layout inside and I think the font you have used works really well.
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Old 18-08-2007, 07:57 PM
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Looks fine for me..
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Did you take the photo for that first image?
If so, can you retake it so that the sunlight is hitting the sign? Would look better.
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Old 19-08-2007, 04:49 AM
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Yeah, I took the first picture. I will try to do that tomorrow, thank you for the advice.
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